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我写催化文章Introduction的体会

本主题由 Mcdull 于 2008-4-22 12:49 加入精华

我写催化文章Introduction的体会

我从事催化研究、撰写催化文章已经有10年了,共发表外国科研论文23篇、外国综述8篇。我的专业网站是:http://zhenmafudan.googlepages.com/home,里面有我的简历和文章列表。虽然我写不出Angew Chemie、Nature Materials那样的“取角度”、“炒概念”的文章,至少写一般的催化文章如履平地。每次我写的稿子(无论我是第一作者或者第二作者)投出去,不同的审稿人都说我文章写得好。我自己是7个杂志的独立审稿人,并且是老板的“代理审稿人”,一共审了70多篇文章。在国内读硕士生的时候的导师和在国外读博士生时候的导师的科技写作水平都超级棒,从他们身上,我学到了很多真工夫。说实话,我觉得我的写作水平比我的博导做博士后时候的时候更强。现在我总结一些自己写催化文章的体会。

写催化文章的第一要素是写Introduction部分,这里面写得好的和写得不好,对文章好坏有很大影响。不好的Introduction有10段,每两三句句子就是一段,段落了段落之间没有联系,整个Introduction没有结构和层次,仿佛想到哪里就说到哪里。我常用的格式是3-4段论。

写文章的时候虽然“帐面”上是3-4段,其实在心里要用3-4句话说清楚个所以然。(这就好比到国际大会上去做口头报告,在20-30分钟内讲了很多东西,内容很充分。但是如果是帖墙报,观众就会说:“我只有5分种。你能否用3-5分钟讲清楚你做的东西。”)如果心里有了这3-4句话,那么这3-4段也就是这3-4句话的扩充。

这3-4句话遵循Q-A-R格式。Q就是question encountered; A就是actions taken; R就是results achieved。Q-A-R就是在Introduction里面说清楚现在这个领域遇到什么问题(当然,一个课题有很多未解决的问题,所以不必面面俱到地罗列很多问题,而要有针对性地罗列本文需要解决的问题);针对这个问题你采用什么(巧妙的、聪明的、系统的)方法;最后你得到什么结果(包括结果的内容和意义)。这是写Introduction的基本格式,下面一段话讲写Introduction的拓展格式。

在Question encountered之前,还可以添加“某某课题引起广泛兴趣”之类的套话。在Actions taken之前,还可以介绍别人采取的actions和自己课题组以前的actions。在介绍别人和自己课题组以前采取什么行动或者方法的时候,不要花大量篇幅讲述细节,因为那样就分散注意力了。有时候短短几句话也能涵盖很多内容。并且在回顾文献已经已经做过的东西的时候,要用GRE文体加上"critical thinking",就是要用"however", "but", "nevertheless", "even though", "unfortunately"之类的词说明什么东西没有做过,什么东西不清楚(而你在本文做了,搞清楚了)。这里面,的确要引用别人的相关文章,而不要隐瞒。还有种不妥当的行为倒并不是不引用,而是引用到错误的地方,或者引得文不对题。别人没说这样的观点,却说别人说了这样的观点。别人做了和这个工作类似的工作,却不直接引用,而是把别人的工作引用在角落里面,这些都是不妥当的。引用别人的工作对自己并没有重大损失,却能显示自己看文献多,"to put our work in proper perspective", "to put our results in proper context"。有的时候,即使被引用的人这次不当这篇文章的审稿人,他看了你发表的文章,认识了你,减少了“敌对态度”,下次当审稿人也会给予方便。相反,如果该引用的不引用,即使这次逃过了,以后也逃不过,名声坏了。

那么,为什么Q-A-R格式是如此的重要呢?这是因为这么写,就说明做实验的人目的明确,看起来有悟性。在商业社会里面,一种人们偏好的品格叫做"goal-oriented",在工程学里面有个术语叫做"goal-oriented design",在找工作的面试当中,回答问题的教科书方法就是Q-A-R格式。同样,在写催化文章Introduction的时候,也要用这种方法。

除了Q-A-R格式以外,还要注意的是每一段要有总起句,一段话说明一个意思。这样一来,就条理清楚,审稿人一看每一段的第一句话就知道作者要写什么了。

怎么安排段落的先后顺序也非常重要。如果编排不好次序,就等着挨审稿人的大斧。现在很多Journal of Physical Chemistry C的文章的内容是纳米催化,好比说有的人合成了纳米花,做了一系列表征,包括最关键的电子鲜微镜,然后做了某种催化反应,发现效果比商品化的催化剂只有差。那么,在写文章Introduction的时候错误的写法是第一段渲染该反应在工业上如何重要,第二段说这种材料很热门,纳米花还没有合成出来过,第三段写本文的目的是研究纳米花上的催化。那么,看了这个Introduction,审稿人就说:“既然你的目的是工业催化,是提高效果,但是你的催化剂效果不好,那么你兜了那么大圈子来合成纳米花,是什么目的?”正确的写法是首先说该材料的各种行貌学很有趣,别人合成出纳米颗粒、纳米管,就是没有人合成出纳米花。本文的目的主要是合成纳米花,然后我们初步研究了纳米花的应用----催化。

以上这一段推广的写作方法叫做"materials-oriented approach",是适于主攻方向是纳米材料的人使用的。在这个方法中,材料是“主角”,而催化是“配角”,其功能就只是等同于XRD, BET, TEM。为什么在这个情况下催化是“配角”呢?因为催化效果不好,并且道理也说不清楚,做的催化工作相对于材料的比重来说少。

其实这种"materials-oriented approach"的方法,只要出现在Chemistry of Materials, Journal of Physical Chemistry的纳米文章里面。对于大多数的催化文章来说,要采取一种"functionality-driven research"的写作方法,就是“功能体系的分子工程学”。写这种Introduction,首先要说某反应很有用,很热门,但是缺点是催化剂活性(或者选择性、稳定性)还不理想。针对这个有待提高的功能,我们做了如此这般工作,发现能明显提高这个功能。这样的Introduction看起来非常舒畅,因为它反映了一种goal-oriented的品质。其实大多数催化文章的目的都是提高效果,但是很多文章没有有意识地按照这种思路去写,或者就是加了很多分散审稿人注意力的东西(比如同样的意思反复说;没有说到点子上;或者说了和每一段中心句子无关的话)。

这里,向大家推荐一篇我主要基于第一作者的实验亲笔撰写的好文章。这篇文章的Introduction非常标准,每一段开头都有总起句。除了最后一段以外,每一段的结尾都有"however..."。Introduction一气呵成,有神韵。

H.G. Zhu, Z. Ma, J.C. Clark, Z.W. Pan, S.H. Overbury, S. Dai*, Low-Temperature CO Oxidation on Au/Fumed SiO2-based Catalysts Prepared from Au(en)2Cl3 Precursor, Applied Catalysis A: General 326 (2007) 89-99.
http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.apcata.2007.04.004

我还向大家推荐一个简化版的Introduction。这个Introduction,每句话都很精炼,但是要讲的信息都在里面了,是我花了一些时间琢磨出来的精品Introduction。

Z. Ma, C.D. Liang, S.H. Overbury, S. Dai*, Gold Nanoparticles on Electroless-Deposition-Derived MnOx/C: Synthesis, Characterization, and Catalytic CO Oxidation, Journal of Catalysis 252 (2007) 119-126.
http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.jcat.2007.08.013

写Introduction要注意的还有一个问题是一上来要从保险的事情讲起。什么事情保险?大家公认的知识介绍最保险,如:常见放黄金的方法有哪几种?黄金被放在什么载体上?这种写作方法叫"sure things first",就象谈判一样,从大家都能接受的条款逐渐谈到有待大家争论的条款。反之,不妥当的写Introduction的方法是一上来就提出一些奇谈怪论或者来炒作概念,让审稿人提高了警惕,最后审稿人看了实验数据,觉得文不对题、莫名其妙。

结论:本文介绍了我写Introduction的秘诀。我的硕士生导师曾经传授了很多宝贵的方法给我,我的博士生导师主要是在纸头上修改文章,并没有介绍很多秘诀。我主要靠导师的传授、自己阅读大量文献(包括审稿)和自己为各种杂志写各种文章。审稿人的真知灼见对我也有很大帮助。希望大家看了我的文章后会有收获。

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  • sally208 在2008-4-23 14:10 评分: 金币 +5 原因: 再次拜读大作了! :)
  • Mcdull 在2008-4-22 12:48 评分: 金币 +30 原因: 精品原创,加入精华.
  • asymmsyn 在2008-4-22 12:02 评分: 金币 +20 原因: 原创内容
  • cc136520 在2008-4-22 11:54 评分: 金币 +10 原因: 拜读大作,不断进步

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直接贴出来方便大家拜读

http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.apcata.2007.04.004
1. Introduction
Gold catalysts are useful for ablating pollutants, cleaning H2 streams, and synthesizing chemicals [1], [2], [3] and [4]. The supports of choice are metal oxides, such as TiO2, CeO2, and Fe2O3 [5]. Although carbon materials are useful as adsorbents, electrodes, and catalyst supports owing to their high surface area, stability in acid and basic media, and the ease of recovering precious metals [6], carbon-based gold catalysts are seldom reported. Recently, the use of Au/C in liquid-phase oxidation of organics has been explored [7], [8], [9], [10], [11], [12], [13], [14] and [15]. This major advance may trigger a new wave of research into Au/C-based catalysts. The activity of Au/C in CO oxidation is very low, however [14], [15], [16], [17], [18] and [19] F. Wang and G.X. Lu, Catal. Lett. 115 (2007), p. 46. Full Text via CrossRef | View Record in Scopus | Cited By in Scopus (0)[19].

Attempts have been made to modify carbon supports before loading gold. In a 3M patent, the inventors impregnated carbon with K2CO3 and loaded gold through physical vapor deposition [18]. They observed enhanced activity in CO oxidation, but the origin of this promotion was not clear, and the leaching of K2CO3 in aqueous reactions was a problem. Kiwi-Minsker et al. [20] impregnated carbon fibers with Fe(NO3)3 followed by precipitation, and loaded gold using Au(en)2Cl3 precursor. The Au/FeOx/C exhibited some activity in CO oxidation but quickly deactivated [20]. Rønning and coworkers [21] and [22] modified carbon nanofibers by TiO2 nanoparticles and loaded gold by two methods. The deposition–precipitation method led to large gold particles (>50 nm), whereas the colloidal dispersion led to smaller gold particles (6 nm). The Au/TiO2/C synthesized via dispersion of gold colloids showed activity in the water–gas shift reaction, but no data on CO oxidation were reported [22].

To design surface-modified carbon-based gold catalysts, it is essential to properly introduce the modifier so as to avoid the mechanical segregation of the modifier and carbon and achieve the catalytic synergistic effect of gold and the modifier. Recently, there has been great interest in the electroless deposition of MnOx on carbon electrodes achieved by immersing carbon in an aqueous KMnO4 or NaMnO4 [23], [24], [25], [26], [27], [28] and [29]. This practice results in the conformal coating of MnOx on carbon with the sacrificial oxidation of carbon surface (4KMnO4 + 3C + 2H2O → 4MnO2 + 3CO2 + 4KOH) [29]. The objective of these studies is to develop high-performance MnOx/C capacitors as energy-storage devices; however, to the best of our knowledge, these novel materials have not yet been used for preparing supported gold catalysts. Herein we report the preparation of gold particles on MnOx/C, along with the characterization, activity, and stability of Au/MnOx/C in CO oxidation. The promotional effect of MnOx is established.

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http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.jcat.2007.08.013



1. Introduction
Since Haruta and coworkers demonstrated that supported gold nanoparticles could be highly active for low-temperature CO oxidation [1], many different gold catalyst formulations have been reported. Deposition-precipitation, coprecipitation, and impregnation are common synthetic approaches utilized to prepare gold catalysts on a variety of supports including TiO2, Al2O3, Fe2O3, and CeO2 [2], [3], [4], [5] and [6]. Among the various combinations of supports and synthetic methods utilized, the deposition-precipitation of Au(OH)xCl4−x− complexes onto TiO2 leads to highly active Au/TiO2 that is the most studied gold catalyst in the literature [2], [3], [4], [5] and [6]. However, despite the wide use of SiO2 as a support for a variety of metal catalysts owing to its high surface area, thermal stability, mechanical strength, and non-reducibility [7] and [8], it is often deemed unsuitable for loading gold. Indeed, the activity of Au/SiO2 in CO oxidation is generally much lower than that of Au/TiO2 [9], [10], [11], [12], [13] and [14].

Several possibilities exist which can explain the failures in obtaining active Au/SiO2 catalysts. First, non-reducible and inherently “inert” SiO2 support does not supply reactive oxygen for CO oxidation. In contrast, TiO2, Fe2O3, and CeO2 supports are reducible, inherently “active”, and are thought to activate and store oxygen [14], [15], [16] and [17] U.R. Pillai and S. Deevi, Appl. Catal. A 299 (2006), p. 266. Article |  PDF (496 K) | View Record in Scopus | Cited By in Scopus (17)[17]. Second, agglomeration of gold nanoparticles can more easily occur if the interaction between gold and SiO2 is inherently weak [6] and [13]. Third, failures due to the use of conventional preparation methods could inadvertently mask the real value of SiO2 as a support for gold particles. For instance, the shortcoming with using deposition-precipitation methods lies in the mismatch between the isoelectric point of SiO2 (IEP  2) and the pH range needed to sufficiently hydrolyze the HAuCl4 precursor to Au(OH)3 or Au(OH)4− (pH 8–10) [6] and [13]. Regardless of the reasons, many attempts have been made to prepare Au/SiO2 (mostly Au/mesoporous SiO2) via alternative methods [12], [14], [18], [19], [20], [21], [22], [23], [24], [25], [26], [27], [28], [29] and [30], but the activity for CO oxidation (which is a sensitive probe reaction to compare the performance of gold catalysts [2], [3], [4], [5] and [6]) was either not reported [19], [20], [21], [22], [23], [24], [26], [29] and [30] or found to be very low [12], [14], [18], [25], [27] and [28].

The assumption that Au/SiO2 is not active for CO oxidation has been challenged since Okumura et al. reported that Au/SiO2 prepared via gas-phase grafting of dimethyl gold acetylacetonate exhibited high activity in CO oxidation [31] and [32]. Others showed that the grafting of alkylammonium [33] or aminosilane [34] onto mesoporous SiO2 could facilitate the interaction between the gold complex and the grafted SiO2 surface, thus resulting in active catalysts. Alternatively, gold particles capped with alkanethiol and alkoxysilane groups could polymerize with tetraethyl orthosilicate to form a metal-organic-inorganic composite active for CO oxidation after calcination [35]. We recently reported the preparation of highly active and stable Au/mesoporous SiO2 (Au/SBA-15) using Au(en)2Cl3 (en = ethylenediamine) as the precursor [36]. One of our key observations was that the catalytic activities of our Au/SBA-15 catalysts were highly dependent on the pH value of deposition solutions [36]. A similar deposition method was simultaneously developed by Zanella et al. to prepare gold particles supported on Aerosil fumed SiO2 [29]. They systematically studied the influence of solution pH value and adsorption time on gold loading and gold particle size of the resulting Au/SiO2 samples [29]. However, the catalytic activities of these Au/SiO2 samples were not investigated.

Because examples of highly active Au/SiO2 catalysts for CO oxidation are scarce [31], [32], [33], [34], [35] and [36], the current research extends the synthetic methods developed to produce Au/mesoporous SiO2 [36] to that of Au/Cab-O-Sil fumed SiO2, and surveys several important catalytic characteristics associated with the catalyst pretreatment, the effect of gold loading, post-treatments in acidic or basic media, catalyst deactivation, storage, regeneration, and the effect of metal oxide additives. All of these parameters were found to subtly influence the catalytic performance. Our results can furnish fresh perspective on the activation and promotion of Au/SiO2-based catalysts that have gone unaddressed, and provide new grounds for the following fundamental and applied research using such easy-to-synthesize and highly active Au/SiO2 catalysts.

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  • Mcdull 在2008-4-22 12:48 评分: 金币 +3 原因: 热心参与.
thank you for your material

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多谢奉献,很有参考价值!

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谢谢,很受用

很不错的,谢谢lz!

很不错的经验

虽然我没有发几篇文章,但是,看了之后依旧非常震撼。

我为人人,人人为我!
谢谢楼主分享!确实,引言对于文章的重要性不言而喻,写引言时一定得针对自己工作中最主要解决的问题来写,才能突出重点,显示出自己工作的重要性。

Work, Finish, Publish!
真是真是taaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai经典了,好好学习!特别是我要好好学习。
其实所有主体的都可参考这么写!

谢谢分享

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